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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 6:40:51 GMT 4
~reserved~ *will write when i feel like it.* [glow=black,2,400][shadow=black,left,400]Final Fantasy 7[/shadow]AdventureQuest Children[/glow]
...black death...
*Note* this is no ordinary fanfiction contains some violence and inappropriate language
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 8:18:18 GMT 4
[shadow=black,left,100]Chapter One: The Attack[/shadow] Light cannot exist, without casting a shadow. Shadow cannot exist, without a Light to cast it.
But when the balance is broken...
It was day. But in BattleOn, it was as dark as night. Blood red light shone upon Lore. The sun was non-existant in the black sky.. This was no ordinary solar eclipse. The people in the town were silently staring at the sky.. some were scared. some knew this would happen some day or another, and it finally came. The last thing everyone could remember was the pair of eyes on the void moon, they shone brightly-
the it all went black. that day, was December the 6th. Everyone died.
THEY DIED.
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A wintry chill pervaded through the night. It was cold, yet an unusal hot wind blew from the north
A cloaked figure moved through Darkovia forest, towards Frostvale- fast and agile, yet so silently. If one's eyes were fast enough, one could see a rare Ultra Dragon Blade hidden in the folds of the Shadow Cloak. The figure stopped suddenly at a forest clearing. His eyes took wide sweeps, taking in the broken and burned trees, fires still burning at the roots. Large, animalistic footprints could be seen on the ravaged forest ground even in the dim moonlight. A trail of destruction leading north.
The cloaked figure briefly checked through his arsenal of weapons before continuing his journey, with, if possible, faster speed than before.
A light can be seen in the distance...
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Flames crackled and fires burned. The small town lit up the night, its modest structures burned like pyres of a bonfire, as heated air and screams filled the air, as the towns-people and moglins ran, all seeking escape from the terror of the attacking raiders.
Appearing from the south without warning, with trained monsters assisting them, the raiders attacked mercillessly, the towns-people and their pets were cut down and killed before they could launch any counter-attack.
A huge, three-storey tall Void Dragon took another deep breath before using its breath attack- a beam of red light shot forwards, tearing through a row of shophouses. The ground melted into lava. At the other side of the town, a small battlion of Exodus battled with Twillight Dweller, who swore to protect his hometown till his last breath. The raiders and the rest of the monsters marched through the snow-covered streets, burning down Frostvale houses and killing any towns-man or women they could find.
Away from all the chaos, behind a slowly burning Frostvale Mansion, a male raider pushed a village girl against the wall and slapped her, hard. Standing not far away, his Soul Banisher pet watched with fascination. "Shut up with the screaming, bitch, and take this like a woman!" With one hand on the struggling girl's throat, he began to work his zip open and loosen his pants.
The screaming grew louder.
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a shadow shifted.
The male raider sensed danger, and turned- but the black figure moved behind him, standing between him and the village girl. But who could move that fast-?
Before he could answer his own question, pain exploded on the back of his head as the cloaked person's hand gripped his skull firmly. the male raider felt himself being lifted into the air by a single hand before being thrown aside.
He smashed into the Frostvale mansion's concrete wall and fell heavily on the gound. Blood was flowing from the back of his head where his skull was crushed. the pain was near unbearable. "Bastard." he coughed. " Fucking bastard." Using his elbow, he pushed himself up to look at the attacker.
If it wasnt for the fires burning the mansion, the person who attacked him would be perfectly camouflaged into the night- just Black cloak, without a shield or a weapon. The cloak looked so light.. like a piece of shadow... Under the hood, a pair of icy blue eys stared back.
the male raider, felt fear for the first time. there was something different about this young man..
Then he shook his head. No. This is just another fool trying to be hero. "Soul Banisher! kill him! saw through his bones, nice and slow!" the Exodus pet,already angry at the cloaked person for attacking its master, needed no second order. Raising its large scythe, Soul Banisher moved through the air towards him.
However, before Soul Banisher could bring his scythe down for the kill, the target moved suddenly, from beneath the folds of the cloak, a hand reached out and grabbed Soul Banisher's wrist. Soul Banisher blinked, surprised. Its arm was then cruelly twisted around- the scythe was forced towards its head, cutting into the helm.
the male raider stared with disbelief. No human- no ordinary human could've done what the person just did..
Soul Banisher then exploded, as an Illuminate Ultra spell was casted from inside its body. As the exodus slowly faded into nothingness, the cloaked person then turned to the village girl, who was still in shock and staring from him to the dying Soul Banisher- and the male raider, who was now trying to stand and run away desperately, but tripped over as his pants was down.
he backed away into a corner at the side of the mansion. but before he could beg for mercy, two arrows flew down from the heavens and pierced him.
Two explosions rocked the whole mansion.
He was dead.
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Back in the town, there were more screams and crying sounds than before. How long has it been? an hour? two hours? Twillight Dweller was heavily injured, yet he stood upright, in battle stance. the attacking raiders have surrounded the storehouses in the middle of Frostvale town, where food, medicine and Chilly's weapons were there. The raiders must not get the uber Nemesis Set...
One of the raiders walked up, supposedly the leader. He opened his mouth to speak to Twillight Dweller- but was interrupted by a soft sound of something wet hitting harder ground.
Everyone turned towards the source of the sound.
A Void Dragon was thrown towards them. It was Lv110, and very strong, yet there were holes and burn marks on its body, and it was missing a leg. It slid on the ground, its draconic blood as lubricant. even the escaping villagers stopped to watch from a distance.
the raiders backed away from the dragon's body. "what the heck?" "who could've done that?!" they were shocked. scared. the leader of the raiders clenched his fist. "Who the hell has done this!" he shouted into the darkness. "which bast-"
then they saw him. A cloaked figure moved out of the darkness, now visible in the firelight. Furious, and leader ordered the raiders to surround him. "Well?" the leader asked the cloaked person. "Any last words before Elder Void Wyrm roasts you to oblivion?" from behind, a huge dragon, 4 times larger than the dying Lv110 Void Dragon, walked towards them.
The un-named person looked down. From inside the fold of the Shadow Cloak, a little Wabbit crawled out. It would've been funny, but they noticed this Wabbit was jet black and had sapphire-blue eyes.
The Leader, however, laughed. "You think your puny pet can save you?" Wabbit stared at him, its eyes emotionless. the leader snorted. "Kill them, Elder Void Wyrm! Void Breath!!"
EVW sucked in breath, it was so strong that the very elemental aura in the area was sucked in also. the fires stopped burning, the cold winds ceased. then its breath attack came.
The cloaked figure calmly raised a huge shield. Siege Tower shield. It held back the deadly beam for a few seconds while the small, weak-looking Wabbit pet attacked. the Wabbit leapt on EVW's neck area, then it turned into a black hole.
Strong winds kicked up, lightning flashed. Stones, rocks and debris were sucked into the black hole, along with EVW dragon, the raiders too, were sucked into black oblivion. Everything that wasnt firmly held down was gone. the leader clung on to a Nemesis Shield stuck in the ground. "What manner of an attack ist this...?!!" he would've survived- but an Earth Fury spell was casted. Sharp spikes pierced through his body from the ground. the wind caught him and sucked him into the black hole.
half a minute was all it took. the wnds died down, Wabbit re-appeared out of thin air. the remaing monsters fled. The village was now silent.
-acey
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:22:28 GMT 4
[glow=red,2,300]=Character Info=[/glow]
Pet: Shadow Wabbit Lvl : ?? TD : ?? Dmg: 100-330 magic dmg
Attack 1: Black Hole Dmg: 1 hit, 1000% base 1000% random, Darkness. B2H: 300%
Attack 2: Ice Oblivion (Absolute Zero) Dmg: 20 hits, 100% base 150% radom, Ice. 100% chance of freezing. B2H: 20%
Trigger: monsters who attack with Elem X base and random boost by +500%
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:26:22 GMT 4
~reserved for Chapt 1 part 2~
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:26:45 GMT 4
~reserved for Chapt 1 Part 2 char info~
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:27:11 GMT 4
~reserved for Chapt 1 Part 3
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:27:42 GMT 4
~reserved for Chapt 1 Part 3 char info~
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Post by Zacky Rev on Apr 6, 2008 11:29:08 GMT 4
i need permission to use my fellow Archslayers' names so well, can i ? ;D ~thread unlocked~
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Post by Valkrin on Apr 6, 2008 11:31:56 GMT 4
Mine!. as long as hes a vampire!
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Post by godofyeti on Apr 6, 2008 11:33:34 GMT 4
You can use my name if you want. Anyway, nice story Zacky!
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Post by Valkrin on Apr 6, 2008 11:36:24 GMT 4
Oh and nice story and read mine to get what my char is like, and I din't like the rape part... I only use hell my In my stories. [glow=red,2,300]~it wasnt rape >.> he was just trying to unzip his pants ~Zacky[/glow] sounds like it was... why was he unzipping them then? >.> [glow=red,2,300]he was trying to, but i didnt let him i killed him with AoV lol ~Zacky[/glow] So he was about too... I still didn't like it. Mind you, you remeber how old I am, No? Still nice heroism+cussing lolz. [glow=red,2,300]oh ok.. well dont worry there wont be much of that in teh story >.> i'll be focusing on how everyone thought i was a traitor and helped the Devourer ~Zacky[/glow] And thats a spoiler.
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Post by epsilon on Apr 6, 2008 20:34:19 GMT 4
i need permission to use my fellow Archslayers' names so well, can i ? ;D ~thread unlocked~ you can use my name if you want
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Rockey
Archslayer....Finally
The Imperial Assassin of the ArchSlayers
Posts: 141
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Post by Rockey on Apr 7, 2008 6:49:10 GMT 4
Nice story, and yes use my name on the condition I am an Assassin, read my newest story to see how old I am (33) and what I am like, and lol RAAAAAAAPE JK man, but couldnt resist heheh...anyway off to bed, nighty night. ~Rock Edit: Not 33 in real life....20 years younger then that
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Post by afterlifex on Apr 7, 2008 8:04:26 GMT 4
very good. Just a few thing i found odd. "A huge, three-storey tall Void Dragon took another deep breath before using its breath attack- a beam of red light shot forwards" (we don't need to know it is using it breath att as it is evident.) It just needs re-working. (don't bother changing it unless you have something better, I couldn't come up with anything I liked) There were a few other thing like that but thats the only one that really bothered me...& that i can remember. But I really enjoyed the story so far, I am just tring to make for a smoother read. (O, and why did the monster lvl matter? I think you should just use things from the game but there lvl shouldn't matter. Just something that gets in the way of the story it self)
O, and if you want to even after my critique of sorts you can use my name.
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Gladius Procella
Archslayer....Finally
Harbinger of Death
Where I go, Death follows...
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Post by Gladius Procella on Apr 7, 2008 10:22:03 GMT 4
you can use my name but remember, im a 324 half elf, master ranger (but thats pretty obvious) and im also a mercenary. Good story and cut back on the rape, plz.
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